review coments

i had just collected the review comments from the faculty they seem to be happy with the way the project is progressing.
her is what they had to say

Patricia

• camera and plane moments are jarring
• more dynamic motion in planes and work effects in(keep the plane moving in forward direction and the effect back wards)
• nice effect
• get close ups of plane using surface shader to block out the motion of planes needs silloete
• simplyfy the end shot

Gavin

• work o camera moves.....tighten up transitions
• work more on dynamics
• don't be literal on size of planes
• perhaps change look of film to help with the time travel

jasmine

• don't add anything-if you focus on making this work well -it will be very beautiful simple piece
• i do like Gavin's idea of going from hd to old film
• would recommend at least one close up of the paper plane